Hi Michael,
I was not aware that underwater cameras are neutral buoyancy. I don’t have much experience with underwater photography but I hope to learn. Maybe you can teach me?!
Is this a turkey?
Honestly there isn’t much room for improvement on your image.
The composition of the frame feels a bit tight but that’s ok. Also, if you have or had access to a medium format camera with a square aspect ratio that might have looked nicer.
The tonal range is good and you clearly know what it means to shoot in black and white.
Two thumbs up here.
Nice work.