Re: Re: Lesson 10

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Duncan Rawlinson
Keymaster

Hi Michael,

As usual your work is right up there at the top of the class.

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There are few issues with this image though.

There is always room to improve.

First let me state that it’s a nice image.

Now onto the business:

1: This area is totally blown out. (did you use an ND filter?)

2: I feel these are distracting. Don’t forget to move your feet and get to the best position. Somtimes that’s extremely difficult.

3: I actually like darkness of this shadow as it adds an element of mistery to the frame.

4: The darkness of these clouds makes this photograph work.

5: What a great building!!

I also like that everything is tack sharp.

Nicely done here Michael. Don’t forget about getting accurate exposures and removing distracting elements.

I’m proud of your images.

Great stuff!