You’ve got the right idea for this assignment.
You have taken some seemingly disorderly and chaotic environments and you’ve brought them into order with the composition and the framing of your images.
However, the photos themselves are not that interesting on their own.
Going forward I’d like you to shoot photos that complete the requirements of the assignment AND stand on their own as interesting photographs.
Here is an example of what I mean:
Cable Clutter by meddygarnet, on Flickr
This photo is chaotic, colorful, AND interesting. Not to mention the composition is ideal….
I hope you understand my point here. Am I being too hard on you? Or do you think this is a fair critique?
I’d like to know what you think.
Thanks!