This is MUCH MUCH better!!!
Photo 2 and 3 are exactly what the assignment calls for. Photo 1 lacks some color and focus and you can see immediately it’s not the quality of the other two images.
I’m glad you went and focused on this assignment again!
I Look forward to seeing what you shoot next.
I hope you can see how much more interesting your second batch of photos are than the first.
btw, can you add your name or website or twitter or anything to your forum signature.
I need to change the setup of the school because it’s hard for me to distinguish between students as it is now. Adding a signature would really help!