Hi Michael,
This lesson is really about simplifying your frame. I’m not sure you’ve understood what this lesson is all about. You’re one of the best students that has been through this course but this lesson wasn’t your best submission. Your last photo is really the only match for this assignment and even it has distracting elements. Try to think simpler. Cleaner. More minimal images.
I want you to shoot this lesson over again. Here are some examples of things that would work for this assignment
http://www.flickr.com/photos/yogendra174/4931561906/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/pinksherbet/3651807335/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/fdecomite/358634247/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/powi/765681050/
Some of these aren’t great photos but I hope you understand what I mean.
If you don’t want to shoot more photos I understand and I will critique these. I’ve just come to expect more from you!
Push yourself here!
🙂