Re: Re: Weather & Landscape Portfolio (Revised)

Duncan Rawlinson

Nice work.

You’ve made some good improvements here.

On this page you have several black and white cloud images which feels a bit like an overlap of the weatherscapes section: (also is weatherscapes an actual word? or did you just invent your own genre? i like the idea of weatherscapes!)

You might want to include a profile picture and reformat your about page. The paragaph spacing looks a bit werid on my machine.

Also you don’t have to say things like, “an aspiring intermediate professional photographer” Just own it, just call yourself a photographer!

Overall you’ve done a nice job here!!