Hi Carolyn,
Thanks for submitting your assignment.
Here is there EXIF data for your images.
Buttes-and-San-Francisco-Peaks.jpg
http://photographyicon.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/Buttes-and-San-Francisco-Peaks.jpg
Date Time Original: 2014:01:12 17:20:13
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White Balance: Auto white balance
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Digital Zoom Ration: 1
Focal Length In 35mm Film: 87mm
Scene Capture Type: Standard
Gain Control: None
Contrast: Normal
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Date Time: 2014:02:03 14:06:12
Software: Adobe Photoshop CC (Windows)
Artist: Carolyn Cogan
Copyright: ©Cogan & Cogan Inc
DateCreated: 2014-01-12T17:20:13.003-07:00
Buttes-along-Highway-87.jpg
http://photographyicon.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/Buttes-along-Highway-87.jpg
Date Time Original: 2014:01:12 17:09:01
Exposure Time: 1/125
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Exposure Program: Manual
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Metering Mode: Pattern
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode
Focal Length: 105mm
White Balance: Auto white balance
Make: NIKON CORPORATION
Model: NIKON D7000
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Scene Capture Type: Standard
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Date Time: 2014:02:03 14:02:49
Software: Adobe Photoshop CC (Windows)
Artist: Carolyn Cogan
Copyright: ©Cogan & Cogan Inc
DateCreated: 2014-01-12T17:09:01.005-07:00
Badger-Springs.jpg
http://photographyicon.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/Badger-Springs.jpg
Date Time Original: 2014:01:23 14:53:04
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Exposure Program: Manual
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Make: NIKON CORPORATION
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Scene Type: Directly photographed
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Exposure Mode: 1
Digital Zoom Ration: 1
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Scene Capture Type: Standard
Gain Control: None
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Date Time: 2014:02:03 14:09:16
Software: Adobe Photoshop CC (Windows)
Artist: Carolyn Cogan
Copyright: ©Cogan & Cogan Inc
DateCreated: 2014-01-23T14:53:04.002-07:00
For the Buttes-and-San-Francisco-Peaks image my very first impression was that your horizon line was crooked. In landscape photography getting your horizon line level is very important. Often people use levels or bubbles on their tripods to be sure. Many times strong lines will make you feel like it’s level when its not and vice versa.
The subject matter is nice but the foreground is a bit dark. The most interesting element to me is the peak on the right and it is awkwardly cropped out of the frame so from a compositional perspective it could be a little better. It strikes me that this image was taken just a bit too late in the day or it needed a bit longer of an exposure with an ND filter to knock down the relatively bright sky.
For your Buttes-along-Highway-87.jpg image you also have a similar issue in that you are shooting a photograph with a wide dynamic range from dark to light that your exposure becomes key. In this case the relatively dark foreground and relatively bright sky are at odds.
In terms of composition I don’t like the inclusion of the road because it offers a distracting and very strong line.
I would have gotten away from the road, moved right up to that fence and used it as a foreground element instead.
Also be careful with your sharpness in a photograph like this. If you look closely you may notice it’s not as sharp as possible. It’s a nice image just remember you always have to choose what to include and what not to include. Often what you choose not to include is more important that you you do choose to include.
In your Badger-Springs.jpg image you have done lots of things right. My first impression though was that the rock close to the center of the frame is so overpowering that it takes away from the image.
I would suggest a composition more like the attached file. (not necesarily the aspect ratio, just the position of the elements in the frame) It would have felt more balanced. At least in my opinion.
Overall though this image is technically strong, sharp, and interesting so you’ve done well.
Remember that nobody knows what goes into getting your photos all they usually see is whats in the frame.
Keep practicing and have fun, you’re doing great.