Hi Paul,
Thanks for submitting another assignment. (I think you made a typo on your photo competition submission that you might want to look at)
For this assignment the goal is really to get people to think about the power of post processing techniques.
In your photos below I’m not sure exactly what you we’re trying to achieve.
The young girl looks like she is sitting in a sort of yellowy soupy water. I’m not sure how this actually improves the look of the photo or creates a dramatic effect.
Maybe you can enlighten me as to what you we’re trying to achieve here and we can go from there.