Oooh much better! 😮
I love it.
The only concern here is to make sure that you capture the whole item you are photographing. In this case you have clipped off the bottom of the cup. It’s no problem you just need to be particularly aware of it if it’s a person: http://photographyicon.com/amputate/
Also compositionally the glass is a bit cramped on the right of the frame.
I love the bokeh!
Thanks for submitting this!