Thanks for submitting another assignment.
Don’t worry about your writing. This assignment is really just to ensure that you are thinking about what you like in photography and where you want to go with it!
One of my great joys is learning right along with my own students.
In this case I had not heard of Ko-Si Chi: http://www.kosichi.com/
He certainly has some great images and I’m sure he would LOVE knowing one of his images inspired you to take up photography.
Your notion of creating photographs that are “concise and clean but reveal natural beauty and sincere emotion” is really a great goal to work toward.
Keep that in your mind when you are shooting. Clean, Concise, and Emotive!
Nice work here.
See you on the next assignment.