Re: Re: Black & White

Duncan Rawlinson

Your images meet the criteria for the assignment but they aren’t very balanced. The image of the cloud in particular is a bit too far into the dark tonal range than I would like.

Your image of the statue is more like it but both images do not have a very wide tonal range. It’s hard for people to see in tones but it’s a useful skill that should be practiced.

I would like you to try this one again. Try to create a wider tonal range.