Lesson 1

[StephanieP]

Here is my first assignment! I am staying at my mother in laws at the moment as we just moved out of the country. This is a Turkish Egg her son got her while he was traveling that she placed into her cabinet. Let me know what you think! Thanks!

[Duncan Rawlinson]

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Not only have you enrolled in the course but you’ve taken action by submitting your first photos!

Onto the critique:

So this was your first assignment. I don’t like to do this on the first assignment but I’m going to have to ask you to re-shoot this one! The only reason is that the goal of this assignment is to try to find a mundane item and try to make it look interesting. In this shot you’ve photographed something very intricate, detailed and inherently interesting. That’s not the goal of the assignment. I trust that you understand what I mean.

No worries if you don’t feel like it!

Let me know.

Thanks!

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