Lesson 1 Redone

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  • #18679
    Ashley Copple
    Spectator

    [attachment=1:2wm0jzhe]002 – Copy.JPG[/attachment:2wm0jzhe]

    [attachment=0:2wm0jzhe]001 – Copy.JPG[/attachment:2wm0jzhe]

    (No matter how many times I rotate and save the images on my computer they upload on here like this…..it’s making me so mad.)

    #21211
    Duncan Rawlinson
    Keymaster

    That’s frustrating! Let me try to rotate them for you and repost them.

    #21212
    Duncan Rawlinson
    Keymaster

    [attachment=1:39a3b0n3]002 – Copy – rotated.jpg[/attachment:39a3b0n3]

    [attachment=0:39a3b0n3]001 – Copy – rotated.jpg[/attachment:39a3b0n3]

    #21213
    Duncan Rawlinson
    Keymaster

    I will critique this now.

    #21214
    Duncan Rawlinson
    Keymaster

    First things first, way to go on submitting your first assignment.

    I’m not sure why there was an issue with rotating the image. Sometimes web browsers don’t know why way to display an image and the get confused but the metadata of the image.

    Speaking of metadata here is the exif data of your images:

    [attachment=2:mqzvieh5]002 – Copy – rotated EXIF.png[/attachment:mqzvieh5]
    Date Time Original: 2013:04:02 13:36:45
    Exposure Time: 1/60
    F Number: f / 5.60
    Exposure Program: Not defined
    ISO Speed Ratings: 6400
    Metering Mode: Pattern
    Flash: Flash fired, compulsory flash mode
    Focal Length: 29mm
    White Balance: Manual white balance
    Make: Canon
    Model: Canon EOS REBEL T3
    Exif Version:
    Flashpix Version:
    Color Space: 1
    Pixel X Dimension: 2848
    Pixel Y Dimension: 4272
    Date Time Digitized: 2013:04:02 13:36:45
    Subsec Time: 98
    Subsec Time Original: 98
    Subsec Time Digitized: 98
    Shutter Speed Value: 6
    Aperture Value: 5
    Max Aperture Value: 4.36
    Focal Plane X Resolution: 4720.44
    Focal Plane Y Resolution: 4786.55
    Focal Plane Resolution Unit: 2
    Custom Rendered: Normal process
    Scene Capture Type: Standard
    ExifIFDPointer: 230
    Orientation: 1
    X Resolution: 72
    Y Resolution: 72
    Resolution Unit: 2
    Date Time: 2013:04:02 12:45:56
    Software: Microsoft Windows Photo Viewer 6.2.9200.16384

    [attachment=1:mqzvieh5]001 – Copy – rotated EXIF.png[/attachment:mqzvieh5]
    Date Time Original: 2013:04:02 13:26:33
    Exposure Time: 1/60
    F Number: f / 5.60
    Exposure Program: Not defined
    ISO Speed Ratings: 6400
    Metering Mode: Pattern
    Flash: Flash fired, compulsory flash mode
    Focal Length: 50mm
    White Balance: Auto white balance
    Make: Canon
    Model: Canon EOS REBEL T3
    Exif Version:
    Flashpix Version:
    Color Space: 1
    Pixel X Dimension: 2848
    Pixel Y Dimension: 4272
    Date Time Digitized: 2013:04:02 13:26:33
    Subsec Time: 58
    Subsec Time Original: 58
    Subsec Time Digitized: 58
    Shutter Speed Value: 6
    Aperture Value: 5
    Max Aperture Value: 5.66
    Focal Plane X Resolution: 4720.44
    Focal Plane Y Resolution: 4786.55
    Focal Plane Resolution Unit: 2
    Custom Rendered: Normal process
    Scene Capture Type: Standard
    ExifIFDPointer: 230
    Orientation: 1
    X Resolution: 72
    Y Resolution: 72
    Resolution Unit: 2
    Date Time: 2013:04:02 12:45:52
    Software: Microsoft Windows Photo Viewer 6.2.9200.16384

    A couple things I noticed immediately.

    Your wider shot of the hour glass is completely out of focus so take a little extra time and make sure things are in focus.

    In your close up image there is a few things going. For one thing you are shooting at ISO 6400 and the flash fired. What that tells me is that there wasn’t anywhere near enough light for your camera in this situation.

    As you will soon learn, cameras are nowhere near as good as the human eye at handling low light situations. Your eye might see a room and be ok with the amount of light but your camera will struggle to make a decent image. That’s the case here.

    If your camera set itself to iso 6400 and tried to turn on the flash it’s basically saying please help me, there is not enough light!

    High ISOs are the way you camera tries to make itself more sensitive. This allows it to shoot in dark situations. A side effect of high ISOs is the image gets very noisy. Take a look at the photo at 100%:

    [attachment=0:mqzvieh5]example of iso 6400 noise.png[/attachment:mqzvieh5]

    Sell all the dots and noise? Thats a result of ISO 6400…

    With film cameras you would buy film that was a certain ISO, the higher the number the more sensitive the film was… Now with digital you can control all that.

    Don’t worry too much though about the technical stuff I just wanted you to be aware of why the image looks so murky.

    Beyond that I like that you have gotten quite close to your subject and simplified the frame. You are also playing with lines in your photograph and symmetry. All of this is great.

    You just need more practice with the technical stuff.

    In this low light situation what you could do to create a nicer image would be put your camera on a tripod, shoot at much lower ISO and use a shutter release cable or your camera’s built in timer to reduce camera shake. You could also control your shutter speed and fstop to achieve the look you want. In this case I would guess you wanted a shallow depth of field (where the bkg is blurry) so you’d use a low f-stop number.

    Whatever the case you are on your way!

    Don’t look at other student’s assignments too much. If everyone just copies the other students’ photos nobody really learns anything. The best students around here do their own thing!

    Way to go.

    See you on the next assignment.

    #21215
    Ashley Copple
    Spectator

    Thank you for rotating those! So are we not supposed to be looking at other student’s posted work? I wasn’t looking to copy by any means, I just thought it was all pretty cool. Will we learn about the f stop stuff later on? I’m not sure what all that means. Thanks so much!

    #21216
    Duncan Rawlinson
    Keymaster

    Oh yes please do look at other students work. I’m sorry if that came off the wrong way.

    I just mean look at other students work but don’t copy them. I have seen lots of students go through the course and just shoot photos that are similar to other students’ work!

    But yes, learn from everyones work just be careful it doesn’t skew your own photos too much.

    Don’t worry too much about the technical stuff too much. You will learn as you go through the course!

    Thanks and high five!

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