Lesson 10

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    MichaelS
    Participant

    Hi,

    I attach a landscape I took very recently and I like it. I will be travelling to Egypt in 2 days via Frankfurt so I guess I will have the chance to take some more photos re landscapes and cityscapes… 馃槅

    Cheers,
    Michael

    #20347
    Duncan Rawlinson
    Keymaster

    Hi Michael,

    As usual your work is right up there at the top of the class.

    [attachment=0:3413snps]landscape-critiqued.jpg[/attachment:3413snps]

    There are few issues with this image though.

    There is always room to improve.

    First let me state that it’s a nice image.

    Now onto the business:

    1: This area is totally blown out. (did you use an ND filter?)

    2: I feel these are distracting. Don’t forget to move your feet and get to the best position. Somtimes that’s extremely difficult.

    3: I actually like darkness of this shadow as it adds an element of mistery to the frame.

    4: The darkness of these clouds makes this photograph work.

    5: What a great building!!

    I also like that everything is tack sharp.

    Nicely done here Michael. Don’t forget about getting accurate exposures and removing distracting elements.

    I’m proud of your images.

    Great stuff!

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