Lesson 11 -Digital Darkroom (Redo)

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  • #18440
    Frederick
    Participant

    Here is my second attempt at lesson 11.

    Hope these are better!

    Fred.

    #20531
    Duncan Rawlinson
    Keymaster

    Fred!!!!

    How are you doing?!

    I can tell these are instantly better than this.

    Here is what I like about what you’ve done here. You’ve taken your computer’s software and you have modified your images in such a way that the final product is superior to the original. Now that’s not as easy as it sounds so you have certainly completed the assignment.

    Even though you’ve simply added a vignette filter of some kind and a sepia filter I think you understand the point. It’s to improve your images using computer software. It’s not about doctoring them or faking them or adding things that aren’t there, unless thats what you’re into.

    What’s more, you’ve completed several different versions of the same image.

    This is nice. It could be a little more subtle but I like it

    Good job Fred.

    Take a moment and look at how this compares to your last submission for this assignment.

    Thank you.

    #20532
    Frederick
    Participant

    Thank you again for the critique. Photo editing takes some time. In the photo of the girl, I tried to remove the blemish on her forehead. I have learned lots from this lesson. I will use this lesson more often in the future..

    Thank you again for all your advice.

    Fred.

    #20533
    Duncan Rawlinson
    Keymaster

    Hey Fred!

    I didn’t even notice the removal of the blemish and guess what?! That’s great!

    That’s the whole idea.

    Excellent. 馃槈

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