Lesson 3 Assignment

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    melissa tate
    Participant

    Hello,

    Here are my photos for aperture (gummi) and speed (tram). Thanks for your feedback!

    Melissa

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    #24463
    melissa tate
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    Here’s the aperture picture. Thanks!

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    Duncan Rawlinson
    Keymaster

    Hi Melissa,

    I can tell right off the bat that you’ve understood the assignment and done well here.

    Let’s look at the EXIF data of both images

    Speed.jpg
    http://photographyicon.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/Speed.jpg
    Date Time Original: 2014:04:18 02:01:08
    Exposure Time: 1
    F Number: f / 22
    Exposure Program: Shutter priority
    ISO Speed Ratings: 200
    Metering Mode: Pattern
    Flash: Flash did not fire
    Focal Length: 35mm
    White Balance: Manual white balance
    Make: NIKON CORPORATION
    Model: NIKON D90
    LensInfo: 350/10 350/10 18/10 18/10
    LensModel: 35.0 mm f/1.8
    Lens: 35.0 mm f/1.8
    Exif Version:
    Date Time Digitized: 2014:04:18 02:01:08
    Subsec Time Original: 00
    Subsec Time Digitized: 00
    Aperture Value: 8.92
    Max Aperture Value: 1.60
    Subject Distance: 4294967295
    Light Source: Cloudy weather
    Sensing Method: One-chip color area sensor
    File Source: DSC
    Scene Type: Directly photographed
    CFA Pattern: 758
    Custom Rendered: Normal process
    Digital Zoom Ration: 1
    Focal Length In 35mm Film: 52mm
    Scene Capture Type: Standard
    Gain Control: None
    Contrast: Normal
    Saturation: Normal
    Sharpness: Normal
    Subject Distance Range: Unknown
    ExifIFDPointer: 216
    X Resolution: 240
    Y Resolution: 240
    Resolution Unit: 2
    Date Time: 2014:04:20 22:01:50
    Software: Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 3.6 (Macintosh)
    DateCreated: 2014-04-18T02:01:08.00

    Gummi2
    http://photographyicon.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/Gummi2.jpg

    Date Time Original: 2014:03:29 10:17:35
    Exposure Time: 1/20
    F Number: f / 1.80
    Exposure Program: Aperture priority
    ISO Speed Ratings: 200
    Metering Mode: Pattern
    Flash: Flash did not fire
    Focal Length: 35mm
    White Balance: Manual white balance
    Make: NIKON CORPORATION
    Model: NIKON D90
    LensInfo: 350/10 350/10 18/10 18/10
    LensModel: 35.0 mm f/1.8
    Lens: 35.0 mm f/1.8
    Exif Version:
    Date Time Digitized: 2014:03:29 10:17:35
    Subsec Time Original: 00
    Subsec Time Digitized: 00
    Shutter Speed Value: 4.32
    Aperture Value: 1.70
    Max Aperture Value: 1.60
    Subject Distance: 0.30
    Light Source: Unknown
    Sensing Method: One-chip color area sensor
    File Source: DSC
    Scene Type: Directly photographed
    CFA Pattern: 758
    Custom Rendered: Normal process
    Digital Zoom Ration: 1
    Focal Length In 35mm Film: 52mm
    Scene Capture Type: Standard
    Gain Control: None
    Contrast: Normal
    Saturation: Normal
    Sharpness: Normal
    Subject Distance Range: Unknown
    ExifIFDPointer: 216
    X Resolution: 240
    Y Resolution: 240
    Resolution Unit: 2
    Date Time: 2014:04:20 22:28:14
    Software: Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 3.6 (Macintosh)
    DateCreated: 2014-03-29T10:17:35.00

    Your speed image reminded me of a spectacular photograph I saw recently online called “Snake On A Train”
    http://500px.com/photo/54816628/snake-on-a-train-by-brian-donovan

    It’s amazing what you can do with the right technique and tools. Keep in mind this photo may be a composite but nonetheless it’s a similar effect.

    That said I did notice the image is a bit soft and I suspect that is due to camera shake. We’re you using a tripod on this photo?

    Your gummy bear photo also reminded me of another photo I saw:
    http://500px.com/photo/1695623/waiting-for-the-bus-by-elaine-mesker-garcia

    Remember you can always try to add people to your photos to improve them!

    Your gummy bear image is a good example of where shallow depth of field can be used to isolate something in your frame and draw attention to it.

    However in this case your depth of field is so shallow that only a small part of one of the red gummy bears is in focus. In other words your depth of field is actually too shallow here. Ideally you would have the entire candy in focus not just part of one of them.

    This is particularly tricky because it may look good on the small screen on your camera but when you look at a print or on large display it just doesn’t look right. In this case your exposure and shutter speed settings just made the depth of field too shallow. (google circle of confusion for more in depth on this)

    I would recommend you work on this a little if only to practice controlling the depth of your depth of field if that makes any sense.

    You don’t need to submit anything here, just put your camera on a tripod and shoot several of the same photograph and explore your depth of field by changing your settings.

    Nice job here. See you on the next assignment!

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