Here is my pictures…
Picture 1: this picture has a same patern when i look up straight on my head
Picture 2: T his picture i mixed the veranda patern ,the patern at the edge of the mosque roof and the patern with the first picture. this picture i took when i walked at the corner inside the mosque
Please give your comment
1: Beware of Camera Shake
In low light situations you may want to consider using a tripod. Otherwise your hands will shake and the photo will become a little out of focus.
2: Distracting Objects
This element in the frame is out of place in this image. (it gives away the fact that it’s a ceiling) In abstract or minimalist photographs of this nature you want to eliminate elements like this by cropping them out!
I like your use of lines in this photograph. Try to incorporate this into your work going forward even if they are explicitly obvious lines like this.
Don’t worry too much about the technical elements of photography at this stage. That will come naturally over time and through the course. Focus more on having fun and shooting lots of images!
Job well done! Welcome to the school and the forum!